Posts Tagged ‘Jasmine’

I have been asked how I develop Ian Carlyle’s romantic interests, and how I write love scenes. I can tell you it isn’t that easy. In the first draft I wrote of “Follow Me to Glory,” set in the era of the Crimean War, there was no romance.  Then several lovely ladies of Gettysburg told me pointedly that if there were no love scenes, not only wouldn’t they buy the book, but no one else would either.  I caved like a cheap tent, ran home to my office, and created the sensual and strong-willed Jasmine.  The book is much better for having done so.  It adds a poignant divergence from the war.

To accomplish the challenge of writing about romance, I first found I had to put myself inside their world – not only Ian’s, but Jasmine’s as well. I was reluctant and somewhat embarrassed to go there, worried what I wrote would be seen as silly or superficial.  The dreaded: “His characters lack depth.  They don’t seem real.”  I had to get past that.  ”It is what it is,” I told myself.

Ian likes strong women.  I placed Jasmine in a man’s world, especially in Victorian England, managing a drinking establishment with an iron fist, yet with a certain persuasive softness as she deals with unruly customers. She is also worldly, with a mysterious background.  I made Ian naïve and innocent by contrast.

As their relationship grows, Jasmine patiently teaches Ian. Translate that to a lovely oriental lady in Japan who taught a young inexperienced seventeen-year-old Marine corporal about the real world over a hundred years later. I found myself becoming more comfortable writing about what I’ve learned of life and romance.

In the sequel, “The Gettysburg Conspiracy,” Ian is more mature, a seasoned veteran on many levels.  Jasmine is for now out of his life, although she manages to come back into it for a second time before the first book ends.  In this, the second book in the Ian Carlyle Series, he meets two women, both strong, but otherwise with very little in common.  One is a specter from his past, and the other a newfound romance.  Ian uses the lessons in life taught him by Jasmine with gusto at times, and with a delicate balance between intense passion and gentle compassion at others.

I was reluctant to write romance and love scenes initially, but I can’t deny it – it’s mischievous and great fun!